What the examiner is looking for: the format exactly as printed on page 243, a subject line that names the workshop, a body in three short paragraphs (who you are → what you want to know → what you want to happen next), a numbered list of specific enquiries, and formal language with no contractions or abbreviations. Marks are lost far more often for a missing subject line or a chatty tone than for weak content.
| From: | ananya.rajan2010@email.com |
| To: | director@shilpadesigninstitute.ac.in |
| Cc: | admissions@shilpadesigninstitute.ac.in |
| Bcc: | — |
| Subject: | Enquiry regarding the Summer Workshop in Design, 2026 |
Message:
Respected Sir/Madam,
I am Ananya Rajan, a student of Class IX at Vidya Mandir Senior Secondary School, Coimbatore. I came across the announcement of the Summer Workshop in Design being conducted by your institute in the month of May, and I am writing to seek further details, as I hope to pursue design as a career after school.
I should be grateful if you would kindly provide information on the following points:
- the exact dates and daily timings of the workshop, and its total duration;
- the eligibility criteria, particularly whether students of Class IX may apply;
- the areas covered — for example, product design, graphic design or textile design — and the number of hours devoted to each;
- the fee payable, and whether any concession or scholarship is available for school students;
- the last date for applying, and the documents to be submitted with the application;
- whether residential accommodation is provided for candidates from outside the city.
I have been keeping a sketchbook of everyday objects for the past two years and would be happy to submit it if a portfolio is required. It would be a privilege to learn at your institute, and I look forward to your response at your earliest convenience.
Thanking you,
Yours sincerely,
Ananya Rajan
Student, Class IX-B
Vidya Mandir Senior Secondary School, Coimbatore
Email: ananya.rajan2010@email.com
Telephone: 98xxxxxx21
- Contractions. Write I am, not I'm; would not, not wouldn't. The instruction on page 242 says so explicitly.
- Abbreviations. Write Class IX, not Cl. 9; and, not &; for example, not e.g. in the body of a formal letter.
- The subject line. “Enquiry” alone is not a subject. Name the thing — “Enquiry regarding the Summer Workshop in Design, 2026” — so the email can be filed and forwarded.